Update on Build 10


Hey! Been another while since I wrote one of these... so much for "consistent updates", huh? TwT

Things are a little rough on the writing side of things for the new build. The whole build is focused on Jasper, as promised at the end of the last one, and I'm struggling with writing our conversation with him. There's lots of world-building, as most of you might've expected, but I can't help but feel it's too "exposition-dumpy", and that this might make it harder for readers to digest.

As such, even though there's still a big chunk of the new chapter left to write (we're at 1500 lines on Renpy now, and I expect we'll go into the 2250s at least), I've decided to release a new halfway build on Patreon to gauge people's reaction to the new content thus far. Because most of my proofreaders are unavailable and I need as much feedback as possible, I'll even allow Dedicated Readers to play through the build, so as to gather as much of it as I can.

If you're interested in playing through the build yourself, subscribe to our Patreon or Ko-Fi pledging 5EUR or more, and I'll try to have it available by tomorrow evening (probably sooner). Assuming I don't need to change too much as a result of this feedback, I expect the full build to be available by the end of next week for paying supporters, and for the public a week after that.

Apologies for the massive delay. I only hope this new chapter makes up for it in quality!

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I’m excited!

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can’t wait!

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I hope you are able to get good feedback.^^ Keep up the good work Sedge.^^