This is the best story ever! I loved reading this very much. I thought the story was intriguing. I really enjoyed the music as well, it seems to go hand-in-hand with every different scene throughout the story. I hope you find my review as a huge compliment because I don't usually leave too many reviews, too often. However, even in my busy schedule I found the time to write this to let you know how great of a job you have done. I look forward to seeing more from you in the future. Thank You for sharing this with the world!
Did not know what to expect at first. I rather like sci-fi and fantasy and this kind of borders on both depending on how you look at it. The story is well written so far. I feel english may not be your native language as tends to be the case in a fair number of VN producers. You did a good job with it anyway. Keep up the good work
I'm not normally a fan of visual novels. But this one really caught my interest. I love the art, and that comic style fight scene was amazing. Great game 10/10.
got a problem and tried every thing to fix it but no mater what the words are all screwed up and kind looks like I can see the code, /nhep/m but so very italic that you can barely read it is what I see for help, but might just be my computer, but it is also not the first, though the programs in between them are fine, I will try some stuff on my com to see if it helps but if not I will comment again.
Hello! If the problem is what I think it is, then I'm sorry to say that it's not something that can be easily fixed: it's a widely-known issue Renpy has with certain setups for no discernible reason. You'll likely experience the same issue playing through other FVNs made with the same engine. My only suggestion is to play the game on another device, such as a phone or tablet, and hope it works. I'm sorry to hear you're experiencing this issue, and I hope that this problem can one day be sorted out.
I'm glad you enjoyed it! We worked super hard on it, and it's great to see our efforts be rewarded like this. Do be sure to fill out the feedback form we've made to give us your impressions on the novel so far if you haven't already! =3
The "login to submit" is necessary so as to prevent people from submitting multiple times. I'm sorry that makes it impossible for you to submit your answers... I'll cherish your answers nevertheless! ^w^
Hey there. I just want to say I really like this game and the direction it is going. Trust me if I could I'd help and be a beta tester (don't know how that would work with you) or if I could actually fund you for this but I can't. I will join your discord though if you would like to let me know when new builds come out.
Now onto some things I would like to say/ask
I noticed that a lot of the story had moment where there was supposed to be a comma but the was this ":". its not all the time that it was unneeded but it was most of the time. My question is "since this game has two Languages, is that a translation error or just a mistake.
Will we be able to download the 2.0 update on itch.io once you get it finished. I see that the other builds are patreon exclusive and I won't be able to download it if that is the case. I would have to pay just to follow you or something like that and I love this game qwq
Now that is all I think I have for rn but yea I'll be joining your discord. If I get to test the prerelease versions of nmf I will be glad to help you on this
Thank you so much! We're really not that great yet, but I'm glad you're having fun so far. The next build should drop soon-ish, so I hope the story's continuation will be to your liking as well. =3
This is a general question prior to purchasing the game. What is the difference between 1.1 and 1.9, is 1.9 just more patches or is there more content?
This was an amazing start of the game! The writing is beautiful and I'm very invested in what will happen next! I'll definitely stick around for this. If you don't mind me asking, is there a way I can find the music used for this game to listen to? It's very enjoyable to hear, but besides that thank you for all your incredible work and I'm happy to see what comes next!
I'm very glad to hear you enjoyed the game thus far! I hope your excitement will only grow once we release the new public build in three weeks from now! ^w^
As far as the music goes, we don't have an official playlist out yet; but we're working on it! It should be out one of these days, and I'll be sure to reply to you again with the link once it's ready.
I wanted to make monee! >=3 Just kidding. NMF was mainly born out of a very bad depression phase I had in August/September of last year. Lots of bad thoughts about death and the afterlife and such... coming up with this idea and exploring it further at least helped me channel all those senseless dilemmas into something useful that might even help other people. -w-
Oh, and as far as references go... we'll have to see! ^w^
The VERY start spoke to me in ways. If you ever want/need perspective from a chronically ill from-birth being, with more than a few VERY close brushes with death to their name, I might know someone. That someone might be me.
I'm sorry to hear that, but also proud that you still live to share your story today. I'm glad my silly robot story could touch you like that, and I hope the continuation will be to your liking all the same.
This is absolutely fantastic! Great writing all around. There is a problem where when human and humanity are spelled wrong but other than that its fanomanal.
It's not spelled wrong, it's deliberate. It'd be weird for furries to call themselves 'human', so we invented a new word that is similar, but different. Regardless, thank you for your feedback! ^w^
This is one of the best games I've ever played, even though it's unfinished. Loved the story, loved the characters, loved the music. 10/10, hope the next update will be there soon.
It was because I forgot to include the code that switches the pronoun around depending on your choice earlier in the game. It's fixed in the new build though!
I'm glad you're enjoying it! Could you specify what exactly you found tedious? Your suggestions might prompt me to rework that section! And thanks! ^w^
Just my opinions, so take them under advisement and maybe they're just me whining too :)
1. Mary Shelley needs to stop hemming and meandering and get to the point of her visit.
2. The reason "I" am in the hospital seems to vary from one bit of dialogue to the next. And while I have cried myself to a sore throat with events similar to this story, it just feels off to me.
Romance isn't a focus of this VN but, as you develop your relationships with the other characters, towards the end, you'll be able to choose one of them to grow even closer to than the rest (it won't affect the ending or your relationship to the other characters). And yes, there will be male romance options as well. ^w^
Oh great! I definitely can't wait to see more of the story then, I hardly ever see any furry VNs that don't focus on romance (not that that's a bad thing either).
It's a lovely game, 10/10. Tho there is only one problem, if I'm not mistaken, it says in the beginning that Mary is petit, and later it says that the protagonist is 7 feet tall, but the sprites are almost the same height...that DOES NOT seem PETIT to me, i know it was probs a limitation with the program you're using, but damn, i was so expecting a size difference and coo at how smol she is. I'm disappointed, i hope you can do something about.
Hmm... yeah, now that you mention it, the proportions could definitely be modded a little to make the size difference a tad more apparent. Thank you for your feedback! I'll see what I can do. ^w^
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just finished today and I have to say I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it >w>
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you're looking forward to even more awesome content for NMF! ^w^
I started reading yesterday and so far, I love it! The story is amazing! Good job!
Glad to hear it! I'm happy to know that you've been enjoying it so far. ^w^
gotta admit this update was a fast one
Definitely faster than the last, for sure! And hopefully, that'll continue to be the case. ^w^
Sedge quick question
a human this will be interesting are the genetically modified being or near extinct species?
this scratched a really good android itch of mine, I really can't wait for more of it
You won't have to wait for long! The new public update will be late next week! ^w^
This is the best story ever! I loved reading this very much. I thought the story was intriguing. I really enjoyed the music as well, it seems to go hand-in-hand with every different scene throughout the story. I hope you find my review as a huge compliment because I don't usually leave too many reviews, too often. However, even in my busy schedule I found the time to write this to let you know how great of a job you have done. I look forward to seeing more from you in the future. Thank You for sharing this with the world!
Your Newest Fan
Thank you for your kind words, fren! I hope to hear from you again as more and more chapters become available! ^w^
thx for makeing this game :)
Did not know what to expect at first. I rather like sci-fi and fantasy and this kind of borders on both depending on how you look at it. The story is well written so far. I feel english may not be your native language as tends to be the case in a fair number of VN producers. You did a good job with it anyway. Keep up the good work
Thanks! I hope the next chapters will continue to surprise you! ^w^
I'm not normally a fan of visual novels. But this one really caught my interest. I love the art, and that comic style fight scene was amazing. Great game 10/10.
Thank you so much! I'm glad I could create something even you could appreciate! ^w^
got a problem and tried every thing to fix it but no mater what the words are all screwed up and kind looks like I can see the code, /nhep/m but so very italic that you can barely read it is what I see for help, but might just be my computer, but it is also not the first, though the programs in between them are fine, I will try some stuff on my com to see if it helps but if not I will comment again.
Hello! If the problem is what I think it is, then I'm sorry to say that it's not something that can be easily fixed: it's a widely-known issue Renpy has with certain setups for no discernible reason. You'll likely experience the same issue playing through other FVNs made with the same engine.
My only suggestion is to play the game on another device, such as a phone or tablet, and hope it works. I'm sorry to hear you're experiencing this issue, and I hope that this problem can one day be sorted out.
New chapter! Time to replay from beginning to enjoy the story to the fullest!
Cotton candy guy & Apollo :D
What a lovely game 100/10
Thank you! ^w^
android apk?
It's being finalized right now. It should be out soon.
Edit: It's out now!
It's out now! Do have fun! ^w^
I love it its a masterpiece and The one yuuman that treating isacc like a normal person makes me happy thanks ^w^
Woooo! This update’s super nice, great job Sedge & co!
The comic part feels so innovative, it’s such a good way to approach fights, just fenomenal!
Really looking forward to the next update!
Oh dear, that was fast! ^w^
I'm glad you enjoyed it! We worked super hard on it, and it's great to see our efforts be rewarded like this. Do be sure to fill out the feedback form we've made to give us your impressions on the novel so far if you haven't already! =3
Yeah, I saw the update and was super excited to play it right away 😅
And sorry but I can’t really send the form, Google is super Tor-unfriendly 😕
(But fyi I’d answer 5, 5, Isaac, Apollo, 4, 5, 5, 3)
If I may, I’d suggest adding a “general thoughts you want to share” textbox at the end and possibly make it so you don’t need to login to submit it.
The "login to submit" is necessary so as to prevent people from submitting multiple times. I'm sorry that makes it impossible for you to submit your answers... I'll cherish your answers nevertheless! ^w^
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Hey there. I just want to say I really like this game and the direction it is going. Trust me if I could I'd help and be a beta tester (don't know how that would work with you) or if I could actually fund you for this but I can't. I will join your discord though if you would like to let me know when new builds come out.
Now onto some things I would like to say/ask
I noticed that a lot of the story had moment where there was supposed to be a comma but the was this ":". its not all the time that it was unneeded but it was most of the time. My question is "since this game has two Languages, is that a translation error or just a mistake.
Will we be able to download the 2.0 update on itch.io once you get it finished. I see that the other builds are patreon exclusive and I won't be able to download it if that is the case. I would have to pay just to follow you or something like that and I love this game qwq
Now that is all I think I have for rn but yea I'll be joining your discord. If I get to test the prerelease versions of nmf I will be glad to help you on this
Discord?
We have an official Discord server, yes! You can find the link on the game's main page if you're interested in joining! ^w^
thank you sedge i am happy
Thank you so much! We're really not that great yet, but I'm glad you're having fun so far. The next build should drop soon-ish, so I hope the story's continuation will be to your liking as well. =3
We do have a Patreon if you are interested; that said, simply playing the game and voicing your opinions on it is enough to support us. ^w^
"main character... is a masterpiece of character design" I'm honored to hear that
This is a general question prior to purchasing the game. What is the difference between 1.1 and 1.9, is 1.9 just more patches or is there more content?
I answered my own question, it is the content as I read the last two paragraphs. I cannot read and I am sorry. Will download this after finals orz
You're fine, don't worry. No need to apologize! Good luck with your finals! ^w^
any update for itch?
plz do
I released a new Devlog yesterday talking about it. =V
thank you i respect you for replying to all of my questions : )
This was an amazing start of the game! The writing is beautiful and I'm very invested in what will happen next! I'll definitely stick around for this. If you don't mind me asking, is there a way I can find the music used for this game to listen to? It's very enjoyable to hear, but besides that thank you for all your incredible work and I'm happy to see what comes next!
I'm very glad to hear you enjoyed the game thus far! I hope your excitement will only grow once we release the new public build in three weeks from now! ^w^
As far as the music goes, we don't have an official playlist out yet; but we're working on it! It should be out one of these days, and I'll be sure to reply to you again with the link once it's ready.
what inspired you to make nmf
and will there be reference to games and tv shows
I wanted to make monee! >=3
Just kidding. NMF was mainly born out of a very bad depression phase I had in August/September of last year. Lots of bad thoughts about death and the afterlife and such... coming up with this idea and exploring it further at least helped me channel all those senseless dilemmas into something useful that might even help other people. -w-
Oh, and as far as references go... we'll have to see! ^w^
thank you
The VERY start spoke to me in ways. If you ever want/need perspective from a chronically ill from-birth being, with more than a few VERY close brushes with death to their name, I might know someone. That someone might be me.
I'm sorry to hear that, but also proud that you still live to share your story today. I'm glad my silly robot story could touch you like that, and I hope the continuation will be to your liking all the same.
Thank you so much!
Here's the playlist! Some of the tracks listed are still not in the game, but they will be eventually! ^w^
https://soundcloud.com/gatortots/sets/no-more-future-ost
THE MUSIC'S INCREDIBLE! THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Very interesting premise, can't wait to see where the story goes!
Thank you! We'll post another update on the new build very soon! ^w^
the game art reminds me of Steven universe i like this game even more
Well, I'm glad you're enjoying it! ^w^
This is absolutely fantastic! Great writing all around. There is a problem where when human and humanity are spelled wrong but other than that its fanomanal.
It's not spelled wrong, it's deliberate. It'd be weird for furries to call themselves 'human', so we invented a new word that is similar, but different. Regardless, thank you for your feedback! ^w^
this game is great i love it
i love this game i played it and now am hooked on the story lines i love it the story everything am looking forward for the next part!
Glad to hear it! ^w^
i cant wait for next part
Me too, fren. TwT
Thanks for the interest!! ^w^
This is just a very well made story, i cant wait for the next chapter
Thank you so much! ^w^
This is insanely good !!! Great job devs!
Thank you! ^w^
Amazing story, great characters, and send my regards to the artist. Absolute masterpiece.
Thanks ^-^ glad that you liked my art
And I thank you as well! We hope to keep delivering a wonderful story to you and everyone else! ^w^
This is one of the best games I've ever played, even though it's unfinished. Loved the story, loved the characters, loved the music. 10/10, hope the next update will be there soon.
Also, i have noticed that in this scene Natalie calls the protagonist "him", even though i've choosen female pronouns
Ah, dear! My bad! We'll release a bug-fix patch today or tomorrow, and I won't forget to include this one in the mix!
i think it's because the default name is male
It was because I forgot to include the code that switches the pronoun around depending on your choice earlier in the game. It's fixed in the new build though!
Cool
This looks quite nice~
Thanks! ^w^
You're welcome~ ^w^
nsfw problem returned
You are correct. We apologize for the trouble, and we hope the issue will be solved as soon as possible. TwT
Happy 3 months old comment day
And I thought Echo was depressing... :)
But seriously, this is a good start. I found some of the prologue a bit tedious, but the lava lamp was good.
P.S. Backing you on Patreon.
I'm glad you're enjoying it! Could you specify what exactly you found tedious? Your suggestions might prompt me to rework that section!
And thanks! ^w^
Just my opinions, so take them under advisement and maybe they're just me whining too :)
1. Mary Shelley needs to stop hemming and meandering and get to the point of her visit.
2. The reason "I" am in the hospital seems to vary from one bit of dialogue to the next. And while I have cried myself to a sore throat with events similar to this story, it just feels off to me.
I see... I'll most certainly keep your thoughts in mind if I ever choose to review the prologue. Thank you for taking the time to write this!
Thank you for taking the time to write NMF and to share it. :)
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REALLY GREAT VN KEEP IT UP DEV
Oh my God aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Thank you so much! I wish you tons of success on this video! ^w^
Great Start! Hope to see more soon!
Thanks! ^w^
Thanks! ^w^
Hi! This is a pretty good VN so far, I'd love to see more! But I was wondering, there is romance here right? And will there be male romance options?
Romance isn't a focus of this VN but, as you develop your relationships with the other characters, towards the end, you'll be able to choose one of them to grow even closer to than the rest (it won't affect the ending or your relationship to the other characters). And yes, there will be male romance options as well. ^w^
Oh great! I definitely can't wait to see more of the story then, I hardly ever see any furry VNs that don't focus on romance (not that that's a bad thing either).
:D
:D
It's a lovely game, 10/10. Tho there is only one problem, if I'm not mistaken, it says in the beginning that Mary is petit, and later it says that the protagonist is 7 feet tall, but the sprites are almost the same height...that DOES NOT seem PETIT to me, i know it was probs a limitation with the program you're using, but damn, i was so expecting a size difference and coo at how smol she is. I'm disappointed, i hope you can do something about.
Hmm... yeah, now that you mention it, the proportions could definitely be modded a little to make the size difference a tad more apparent. Thank you for your feedback! I'll see what I can do. ^w^
Well, i should prepare myself for an existential crisis before playing this.
Good luck! Hope you enjoy! ^w^
:D