Excellent stuff, maybe run the dialog by an editor though? Just a wildly small number of grammatical issues but why settle? Polish it as you go early and you've got a rad lil gem here.
We actually already have a couple beta-readers and proofreaders onboard already, but sometimes even they have trouble catching every mistake I make... if there are any you feel we've missed, be sure to list them for us and we'll fix them right away! ^w^
Can you make it where you can punch the dragon dude when you choose the option where are you tell him that he’s scaring the assistant (sorry I forgot their names)
The Patreon is coming out today! The next chapter will be released to the public some time in the middle of next month (or so I plan, anyway), while the Patreon version should be out early next month. ^w^
I'm really enjoying the vibes I get from this VN. I'll definitely be keeping my eye on it until it's all done! Thank you for this wonderful experience.
"Assuming I'm alive in the first place: can't really throw away a life I don't have." - a haunting line I'll remember forever.
A fantastic premise that's handled with the right amount of care such topics require. This first chapter is a great introduction to your characters.
Loved to get inside Isaac's mind, to see them react to everything: their situation, to others, and to the world around them. A unique visual style with a fantastic soundtrack.
Best VN I've read this year. Eagerly looking forward to the entire story!
I'm super happy to hear that! I'm glad you've been enjoying the ride so far, and I'm eager to keep delivering more awesome content in the coming months! ^w^
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I love it hope we will have a chance to support your project on patron ;)
You already can! ^w^
Excellent stuff, maybe run the dialog by an editor though? Just a wildly small number of grammatical issues but why settle? Polish it as you go early and you've got a rad lil gem here.
We actually already have a couple beta-readers and proofreaders onboard already, but sometimes even they have trouble catching every mistake I make... if there are any you feel we've missed, be sure to list them for us and we'll fix them right away! ^w^
I only noticed 2 typos. Hope it's okay to list them:
https://imgur.com/a/9c7PrcC
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I'll remove them right away, thank you so much for listing them! TwT
Keep up the absolutely great work, it’s fantastic!
The witty dialogue, the cool art, nice music, the lively characters, the insanely good story, the feels… This is a gem!
I’m super excited to see how it goes, I’m hooked! Huge kudos and thanks to you Sedge, this is breathtakingly good!
Aww, thank you so, so much! TwT
I hope your opinion of the next chapter will be equally as good! ^w^
Fucking amazing!
Thanks! ^w^
Can you make it where you can punch the dragon dude when you choose the option where are you tell him that he’s scaring the assistant (sorry I forgot their names)
Just started the game on my phone (thanks for that port by the way), and I'm loving it so far. Looking forward to the updates.
Nice! Glad you're enjoying yourself so far! ^w^
what is your pateron and when is the next bit comeing out (sorry for bad spelling)
The Patreon is coming out today! The next chapter will be released to the public some time in the middle of next month (or so I plan, anyway), while the Patreon version should be out early next month. ^w^
I'm really enjoying the vibes I get from this VN. I'll definitely be keeping my eye on it until it's all done! Thank you for this wonderful experience.
Buckle up then, it's going to be a long, wild ride! >=3
Great work so far, can't wait for the rest! I love when media discusses the more existential questions.
Thanks for the compliments! ^w^
Just downloaded. Can't wait to try it out!
Glad to hear that! I hope you enjoy the build! ^w^
"Assuming I'm alive in the first place: can't really throw away a life I don't have." - a haunting line I'll remember forever.
A fantastic premise that's handled with the right amount of care such topics require. This first chapter is a great introduction to your characters.
Loved to get inside Isaac's mind, to see them react to everything: their situation, to others, and to the world around them.
A unique visual style with a fantastic soundtrack.
Best VN I've read this year. Eagerly looking forward to the entire story!
I'm super happy to hear that! I'm glad you've been enjoying the ride so far, and I'm eager to keep delivering more awesome content in the coming months! ^w^
LETS GO!!!
Indeed