There are a lot of creators out there who love to complain about storytelling cliches, even as they frequently use more storytelling cliches than everyone around them.
It's... odd.
But there are many, many cliches when it comes to most itch.io visual novels.
Your self-aware parody was... unique.
Though, it does make me wonder if there are any itch.io creators out there who would sincerely care enough to write a story that doesn't revolve around wit and sarcasm and unoriginal references...
The original game is exactly what you described in the last two paragraphs. You admit that this is a self-aware parody of wit and sarcasm and unoriginal references, (after, of course, explaining how you don't like hypocrites), and then complain that this is a "story" that revolves around said wit and sarcasm.
What makes me go out of my way to post this comment is the fact that, from your writing, you believe both points of view. This is a query to clarify your exact opinion.
And if you want some Itch.io creator to make your dream game, become that creator and make your dream game. This is an afterthought you don't have to listen to, but it would be nice if I stumbled upon a visual novel with a story that doesn't revolve around wit and sarcasm.
Bro the sentence "shockingly and surprisingly, breasting boobily down the stairs." Had me dead
Edit: where is the elbow drop goddamnit I just realized this was released last year so IMMA NEED TO SEE MARRY GET ELBOW DROPPED SOME TIME THIS YEAR IDC IF ITS THE LAST DAY OF JULY IMMA NEED TO SEE IT
the acronym for the game ylp is pronounced UH-LU-P its a silent y. also it would be cool if in the conversation part of the GUI the names changed every time, so when it is drawn the names are randomly selected from lists of names that are remotely similar.
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Sequel when
or at least update, when!?
WHEN!?!?!?
The script was... interesting.
There are a lot of creators out there who love to complain about storytelling cliches, even as they frequently use more storytelling cliches than everyone around them.
It's... odd.
But there are many, many cliches when it comes to most itch.io visual novels.
Your self-aware parody was... unique.
Though, it does make me wonder if there are any itch.io creators out there who would sincerely care enough to write a story that doesn't revolve around wit and sarcasm and unoriginal references...
Maybe one day.
...what.
The original game is exactly what you described in the last two paragraphs. You admit that this is a self-aware parody of wit and sarcasm and unoriginal references, (after, of course, explaining how you don't like hypocrites), and then complain that this is a "story" that revolves around said wit and sarcasm.
What makes me go out of my way to post this comment is the fact that, from your writing, you believe both points of view. This is a query to clarify your exact opinion.
And if you want some Itch.io creator to make your dream game, become that creator and make your dream game. This is an afterthought you don't have to listen to, but it would be nice if I stumbled upon a visual novel with a story that doesn't revolve around wit and sarcasm.
Bro the sentence "shockingly and surprisingly, breasting boobily down the stairs." Had me dead
Edit: where is the elbow drop goddamnit I just realized this was released last year so IMMA NEED TO SEE MARRY GET ELBOW DROPPED SOME TIME THIS YEAR IDC IF ITS THE LAST DAY OF JULY IMMA NEED TO SEE IT
It was really funny, I had trouble reading it from laughter
Hmm, no more future based? I did not finish no more future, but sounds fun :)
This game is
goodNow this is the kind of quality content worthy of being played at three in the morning
once i burn through no more future imma see what this is about
Have you seen what this is about yet ;)
this is stupid and i love it i just luah at the first part of the game
Nice
is that a toaster?
Should've been YassLessPast smh /j. Btw I am the one of the three Arthur fans #Arthurisn'tabusiveandIcandfixhimandmakehimbetter
yaaaaaaaaas queen
Ik I'm a year too late but
YAAAAASSSSSSSS QUEEEEEEENNN
Your welcome the person covid was trying to take out.
Anyways have a nice day :3
10/10
absolutely amazing
11/10 the toaster set my house on fire
This is... Art
... 10/10 - phalanxx
Nemurin in maid dress 11/10
the acronym for the game ylp is pronounced UH-LU-P its a silent y. also it would be cool if in the conversation part of the GUI the names changed every time, so when it is drawn the names are randomly selected from lists of names that are remotely similar.
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Yes
I was disappointed that this wasn't just a virus.
the ultimate april fools prank
Time for the real future! Assume your T-Pose!
Instructions unclear, after pulling my phone out of the toaster it still won't run the game.
Sex DLc when
This game gets 27777777777 pancakes out of 5215692 random junk