I'm glad you're enjoying it! Could you specify what exactly you found tedious? Your suggestions might prompt me to rework that section! And thanks! ^w^
Just my opinions, so take them under advisement and maybe they're just me whining too :)
1. Mary Shelley needs to stop hemming and meandering and get to the point of her visit.
2. The reason "I" am in the hospital seems to vary from one bit of dialogue to the next. And while I have cried myself to a sore throat with events similar to this story, it just feels off to me.
Romance isn't a focus of this VN but, as you develop your relationships with the other characters, towards the end, you'll be able to choose one of them to grow even closer to than the rest (it won't affect the ending or your relationship to the other characters). And yes, there will be male romance options as well. ^w^
Oh great! I definitely can't wait to see more of the story then, I hardly ever see any furry VNs that don't focus on romance (not that that's a bad thing either).
It's a lovely game, 10/10. Tho there is only one problem, if I'm not mistaken, it says in the beginning that Mary is petit, and later it says that the protagonist is 7 feet tall, but the sprites are almost the same height...that DOES NOT seem PETIT to me, i know it was probs a limitation with the program you're using, but damn, i was so expecting a size difference and coo at how smol she is. I'm disappointed, i hope you can do something about.
Hmm... yeah, now that you mention it, the proportions could definitely be modded a little to make the size difference a tad more apparent. Thank you for your feedback! I'll see what I can do. ^w^
Excellent stuff, maybe run the dialog by an editor though? Just a wildly small number of grammatical issues but why settle? Polish it as you go early and you've got a rad lil gem here.
We actually already have a couple beta-readers and proofreaders onboard already, but sometimes even they have trouble catching every mistake I make... if there are any you feel we've missed, be sure to list them for us and we'll fix them right away! ^w^
Can you make it where you can punch the dragon dude when you choose the option where are you tell him that he’s scaring the assistant (sorry I forgot their names)
The Patreon is coming out today! The next chapter will be released to the public some time in the middle of next month (or so I plan, anyway), while the Patreon version should be out early next month. ^w^
I'm really enjoying the vibes I get from this VN. I'll definitely be keeping my eye on it until it's all done! Thank you for this wonderful experience.
"Assuming I'm alive in the first place: can't really throw away a life I don't have." - a haunting line I'll remember forever.
A fantastic premise that's handled with the right amount of care such topics require. This first chapter is a great introduction to your characters.
Loved to get inside Isaac's mind, to see them react to everything: their situation, to others, and to the world around them. A unique visual style with a fantastic soundtrack.
Best VN I've read this year. Eagerly looking forward to the entire story!
I'm super happy to hear that! I'm glad you've been enjoying the ride so far, and I'm eager to keep delivering more awesome content in the coming months! ^w^
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You are correct. We apologize for the trouble, and we hope the issue will be solved as soon as possible. TwT
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And I thought Echo was depressing... :)
But seriously, this is a good start. I found some of the prologue a bit tedious, but the lava lamp was good.
P.S. Backing you on Patreon.
I'm glad you're enjoying it! Could you specify what exactly you found tedious? Your suggestions might prompt me to rework that section!
And thanks! ^w^
Just my opinions, so take them under advisement and maybe they're just me whining too :)
1. Mary Shelley needs to stop hemming and meandering and get to the point of her visit.
2. The reason "I" am in the hospital seems to vary from one bit of dialogue to the next. And while I have cried myself to a sore throat with events similar to this story, it just feels off to me.
I see... I'll most certainly keep your thoughts in mind if I ever choose to review the prologue. Thank you for taking the time to write this!
Thank you for taking the time to write NMF and to share it. :)
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REALLY GREAT VN KEEP IT UP DEV
Oh my God aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Thank you so much! I wish you tons of success on this video! ^w^
Great Start! Hope to see more soon!
Thanks! ^w^
Thanks! ^w^
Hi! This is a pretty good VN so far, I'd love to see more! But I was wondering, there is romance here right? And will there be male romance options?
Romance isn't a focus of this VN but, as you develop your relationships with the other characters, towards the end, you'll be able to choose one of them to grow even closer to than the rest (it won't affect the ending or your relationship to the other characters). And yes, there will be male romance options as well. ^w^
Oh great! I definitely can't wait to see more of the story then, I hardly ever see any furry VNs that don't focus on romance (not that that's a bad thing either).
:D
:D
It's a lovely game, 10/10. Tho there is only one problem, if I'm not mistaken, it says in the beginning that Mary is petit, and later it says that the protagonist is 7 feet tall, but the sprites are almost the same height...that DOES NOT seem PETIT to me, i know it was probs a limitation with the program you're using, but damn, i was so expecting a size difference and coo at how smol she is. I'm disappointed, i hope you can do something about.
Hmm... yeah, now that you mention it, the proportions could definitely be modded a little to make the size difference a tad more apparent. Thank you for your feedback! I'll see what I can do. ^w^
Well, i should prepare myself for an existential crisis before playing this.
Good luck! Hope you enjoy! ^w^
:D
I love it hope we will have a chance to support your project on patron ;)
You already can! ^w^
Excellent stuff, maybe run the dialog by an editor though? Just a wildly small number of grammatical issues but why settle? Polish it as you go early and you've got a rad lil gem here.
We actually already have a couple beta-readers and proofreaders onboard already, but sometimes even they have trouble catching every mistake I make... if there are any you feel we've missed, be sure to list them for us and we'll fix them right away! ^w^
I only noticed 2 typos. Hope it's okay to list them:
https://imgur.com/a/9c7PrcC
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
I'll remove them right away, thank you so much for listing them! TwT
Keep up the absolutely great work, it’s fantastic!
The witty dialogue, the cool art, nice music, the lively characters, the insanely good story, the feels… This is a gem!
I’m super excited to see how it goes, I’m hooked! Huge kudos and thanks to you Sedge, this is breathtakingly good!
Aww, thank you so, so much! TwT
I hope your opinion of the next chapter will be equally as good! ^w^
Fucking amazing!
Thanks! ^w^
Can you make it where you can punch the dragon dude when you choose the option where are you tell him that he’s scaring the assistant (sorry I forgot their names)
Just started the game on my phone (thanks for that port by the way), and I'm loving it so far. Looking forward to the updates.
Nice! Glad you're enjoying yourself so far! ^w^
what is your pateron and when is the next bit comeing out (sorry for bad spelling)
The Patreon is coming out today! The next chapter will be released to the public some time in the middle of next month (or so I plan, anyway), while the Patreon version should be out early next month. ^w^
I'm really enjoying the vibes I get from this VN. I'll definitely be keeping my eye on it until it's all done! Thank you for this wonderful experience.
Buckle up then, it's going to be a long, wild ride! >=3
Great work so far, can't wait for the rest! I love when media discusses the more existential questions.
Thanks for the compliments! ^w^
Just downloaded. Can't wait to try it out!
Glad to hear that! I hope you enjoy the build! ^w^
"Assuming I'm alive in the first place: can't really throw away a life I don't have." - a haunting line I'll remember forever.
A fantastic premise that's handled with the right amount of care such topics require. This first chapter is a great introduction to your characters.
Loved to get inside Isaac's mind, to see them react to everything: their situation, to others, and to the world around them.
A unique visual style with a fantastic soundtrack.
Best VN I've read this year. Eagerly looking forward to the entire story!
I'm super happy to hear that! I'm glad you've been enjoying the ride so far, and I'm eager to keep delivering more awesome content in the coming months! ^w^
LETS GO!!!
Indeed